Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land Corrected sentence #1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable. Corrected sentence #2: The student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL # 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library Corrected sentence #1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine. Corrected sentence #2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, The Plague," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL #27
sentence 1: Everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
sentence 2: Having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner Corrected sentence #1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations. Corrected sentence #2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL #28
Sentence #1: i remember when my neighbor he set u a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe hallyes comet
Sentence #2: ms masayo aksed do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing Corrected Sentence #1: I remember when my neighbor set you a huge telescope, the larger I had ever seen to observe Hallye's comet. Corrected Sentence #2: Ms.Masayo asked Walter, "Do you feel all right now or Don't you want to go skiing?"
DOL 29-32 SKIP
DOL # 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bring them to the library
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified Corrected Sentence #1: "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?" Corrected Sentence #2: The Constitutional Convention in 1787 drafted, the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL # 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier Corrected Sentence #1: Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain. Corrected Sentence #2: While half the class uses the internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different than the ones we used earlier.
DOL # 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming Corrected Sentence #1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft. Corrected sentence #2: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
DOL # 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think Corrected Sentence #1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal stated. Corrected Sentence #2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
DOL # 37
Sentence 1:
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected Sentence #1:
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois, MN
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL # 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
Corrected Sentence #1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.
Corrected Sentence #2 : We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.
DOL # 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner Corrected Sentence #1: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 Corrected Sentence #2: Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday October, 29.
DOL # 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry Corrected sentence #1: Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlanta. Corrected sentence #2:"Oscar, please set these books on the library table, if you don't have a lot of things to carry."
DOL # 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to mark lands to encourage new growth
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillia very many miracle drugs appeared, ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs Corrected sentence #1: Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth. Corrected sentence #2: After the discovery of penicillia, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically though forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
DOL # 42
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests Corrected sentence #1: Differences between the eight camp counselors cause a change in the field trip's destination. Corrected sentence #2: First Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL # 43
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found Corrected Sentence #1:Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club? Corrected Sentence #2: The article 'In Search of Spanish Galleons' in the book Shipwrecks was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the galleons will be found.
DOL #25
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
Corrected sentence #1: The Titanic carried more than 1,500 people to their graves; it was believed to be unsinkable.
Corrected sentence #2: The student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary that we finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL # 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Corrected sentence #1: Many well known writers submit articles and stories to the Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Corrected sentence #2: "I am very eager to read the French novel, The Plague," Carmen said, "but it's not in our library."
DOL #27
sentence 1: Everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
sentence 2: Having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
Corrected sentence #1: Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Corrected sentence #2: Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL #28
Sentence #1: i remember when my neighbor he set u a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe hallyes comet
Sentence #2: ms masayo aksed do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
Corrected Sentence #1: I remember when my neighbor set you a huge telescope, the larger I had ever seen to observe Hallye's comet.
Corrected Sentence #2: Ms.Masayo asked Walter, "Do you feel all right now or Don't you want to go skiing?"
DOL 29-32 SKIP
DOL # 33
Sentence 1: when are these books due hans should i bring them to the library
Sentence 2: after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
Corrected Sentence #1: "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?"
Corrected Sentence #2: The Constitutional Convention in 1787 drafted, the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL # 34
Sentence 1: much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
Sentence 2: while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
Corrected Sentence #1: Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Corrected Sentence #2: While half the class uses the internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazines that are different than the ones we used earlier.
DOL # 35
Sentence 1: oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
Sentence 2: since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
Corrected Sentence #1: Oh, we haven't finished our group book report because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.
Corrected sentence #2: My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone river, hiking in Montana, and camping in Wyoming.
DOL # 36
Sentence 1: there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
Sentence 2: the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
Corrected Sentence #1: "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal stated.
Corrected Sentence #2: The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
DOL # 37
Sentence 1:
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
Corrected Sentence #1:
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois, MN
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL # 38
Sentence 1: because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
Sentence 2: we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
Corrected Sentence #1: The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights that we are all privileged to enjoy.
Corrected Sentence #2 : We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.
DOL # 39
Sentence 1: to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
Corrected Sentence #1: To be allowed to go to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help my Mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2: mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
Corrected Sentence #2: Mr. Corazzini, who can never start his car, took the bus to Dulles Airport on Tuesday October, 29.
DOL # 40
Sentence 1: luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
Sentence 2: oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
Corrected sentence #1: Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin in Atlanta.
Corrected sentence #2:"Oscar, please set these books on the library table, if you don't have a lot of things to carry."
DOL # 41
Sentence 1: park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to mark lands to encourage new growth
Sentence 2: after the discovery of penicillia very many miracle drugs appeared, ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
Corrected sentence #1: Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked lands to encourage new growth.
Corrected sentence #2: After the discovery of penicillia, many miracle drugs appeared; ironically though forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
DOL # 42
Sentence 1: because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
Sentence 2: first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
Corrected sentence #1: Differences between the eight camp counselors cause a change in the field trip's destination.
Corrected sentence #2: First Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL # 43
Sentence 1: do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
Sentence 2: the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
Corrected Sentence #1:Do Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
Corrected Sentence #2: The article 'In Search of Spanish Galleons' in the book Shipwrecks was written by Kiber and Rotondi who believe the galleons will be found.